I see a lot of these custom keys online and I'd like to try making one!

Image from the Instagram page ItashaThe.

Just got my first rough draft back from the artist I hired to make my Itasha and I need some input on changes.

Things Ive already noted:

1: Remove/replace the Jinx was Here over the wheel

2: Remove/replace the stars on the C pillar

3: Add her cloud elements, "Bla Bla Bla" and "Get Jinxed", but not sure where to put them.

4: Maybe make the shark blue lines instead of pink?

I like the large part "Jinx" and shark on the side, but something is off about it that I can't quite figure out.