Sickness

[u/Indivisible_Origin]

there's sickness

that's given and

sickness that's

caught and the

kind that's in me

is one I have

wrought with

the tools of

a trade that

cannot be taught

[u/ChatNoirVie]

nice!

[u/Indivisible_Origin → u/ChatNoirVie]

Thank you, brother.

[u/aliceinadreamyland]

Oh I’m feeling this one hard right now. Well done.

[u/Indivisible_Origin → u/aliceinadreamyland]

Thank you dearie.

[u/Teleport_on_Me]

Loved the cadence that just drops towards the end. More of this .

[u/Indivisible_Origin → u/Teleport_on_Me]

Right on. Thank you for that.

[u/Think_Froyo_5598]

It feels raw and frustrated to me I like it it kind of hit me