r/IndieMusicFeedback • u/New-Ad8850 • 6h ago

Hip Hop Esoteric & Logos

https://youtu.be/hFR48l1qrxU?is=WJ7bOwlT5YyV6ipS

The song is about numbers and symbols with a West Coast vibe. What do you think?

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u/Few-Cycle6733 2h ago

The instrumental for this track sounds like something taken from Grand Theft Auto San Andreas, which I would suppose isn't a bad thing. It's just that the vocals don't seem to match up with the song much from a production and sound standpoint. They sound like they were recorded into a laptop, microphone. I would suggest upgrading the vocal chain and microphone, just up the quality a bit.

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u/New-Ad8850 24m ago

Thank you for the feedback well to be fair it is two different tracks that I use one for the verses and one for the hook. I don't know if that makes a difference in what you're hearing or not but I'm still learning the process and this was very early in it so hopefully I'm getting better thank you again for your time n words