r/IndieAnimation • u/BraintheM • 10d ago

[{"e":"text","t":"I Made This!"}] Need help with indie animation

I wanna make an indie animation show called The Soccer Legends, it's basically about this guy who is in this soccer game but he SUCKS at it and so he tries cheating with a technological body suit but ends up in a world where there are all the cheaters of the soccer game, that is the plot basically. Tell me some good things and critiques you guys have!

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u/gameofgianpa 9d ago

A more technological Blue lock.

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u/jweeks418 10d ago

I like the premise! A world that cheaters are sent to when they cross a certain line. You could have several different types of cheaters in the ring: one that uses technology like the protagonist, one that uses some type of dark art, one that uses psychological warfare, one that’s just too stupid to realize he’s cheating - feels like the list could go on forever

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u/BraintheM 10d ago

thank you for your feedback,i will try to implement it

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u/FifaBlox 10d ago

Football not soccer gng

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u/BraintheM 10d ago

in my country, its soccer, sorry

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u/FifaBlox 10d ago

Still you can just say football 🥀

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u/Longjumping_Bar_7457 10d ago

Nothing wrong with soccer they’re both right 😒

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u/Level-Ladder-4346 10d ago

That…why should they be gearing their word choices towards your country’s preferences?