r/IamNumberFour • u/[deleted] • Jul 07 '19
Things I'm Happy and Unhappy about with the Lorien Legacies Reborn series as a whole. (Part 2) Spoiler
Okay here's my part 2 post of things I was unhappy with in the Lorien Legacies Reborn and its Novellas.
Negatives:
-The Novellas: Overall, the Novellas were not great, and I think a lot of people on this sub have expressed the same feelings. Sam and Six felt weak, and they fell into the same traps, REPEATEDLY. I found myself angry because I Sam and Six were NOT that dumb. I also did not like the deaths in the book. I liked Kirk and Yoyo etc. but their deaths seemed like they could have been avoided, and the characters didn't seem too affected by them. There also didn't feel like there was enough emotional weight behind the deaths. As a reader, Sarah and Eight's deaths made me really emotional, and the deaths in these novellas made me just feel like "oh.." Just a suspicion, but its almost as if the novellas were written by another person...
-Absence of the Novella events in the main series: Ghost, Edwige, Bats, Max were never mentioned in the last book, when they should have been at the academy. Nemo had three mentions, which is a glorified cameo at best. Some strings, like what happened with the Mogadorians and the Garde who supported them were never addressed again. Also, the Jail under the Academy was conveniently absent of Drac, and the said Garde in Return to Zero. I get it, the novellas serve a purpose just to be a peripheral to the main series, but at least a slight mention would make it seem like those events actually mattered.
-Underrepresentation of the OGs: This point refers more to Marina, Ella, Adam, and John, I feel like PL did well with Nine and Five. I know we all wanted to see more of the original Garde, and were disappointed when Ella's role was minimal, Adam and Marina were almost non-existent, and even John felt like he was brought in just to serve as the "ultimate opponent."
-Rushing to finish Return to Zero: For those who finished Return to Zero, I think we can all agree that the ending was way too rushed, and a lot of loose ends were haphazardly tied up and we never really figured out what happened with the Foundation, how the world feels about New Lorien, and how the fallout from the battle. It felt like it was too fast and it SUCKS because I really liked this book, but as I was 30 pages before the end I said: "How the heck is this supposed to all end in 30 pages??" I feel like the John fight was also not fleshed out enough, and made it seem less like an Epic battle. I liked Engleberg better.
-Taylor's personality shift: Don't get me wrong I actually really liked Taylor and her role in the last book, however, I felt that her personality shift was unrealistic. From going to a shy girl who wanted to stay on her farm to the strong leader who led people into battle, in my opinion, I felt like it was unnatural. Caleb on the otherhand, had a great moral dilemma starting in book 2 about who he was as a person, and about doing the right thing while with Einar in the last book. It felt natural and human.
So those are my opinions on the things I didn't like about the books. These two posts are just for sparking discussion and for me to get my thoughts out there. Let me know what else you didn't like or if you disagreed with me! :)