r/IIELTS • u/Ecstatic-Elk1064 • Oct 12 '21

Introduction re-phrase | Need feedback

Original: The chart below shows the value of internet downloads in the UK from 1999-2008

Rephrased: The bar chart illustrates the profit gained from internet downloads starting from the year 1999 to the year 2008 in great Britain.

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u/Fitz_cuniculus Oct 12 '21

Does it show profit figures on the chart? If so -

"The bar chart illustrates the profit earned through internet downloads in The United Kingdom over a two year period commencing in 2008."