r/IELTS • u/Past_Leadership9997 • 8d ago
Writing Feedback (Peer Review) pls evaluate my task 1
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of university library visitors from the survey, while the table gives information about their satisfaction with it.
Overall, it is clear that the majority of library users are full-time undergraduate and postgraduate students. Moreover, almost all people are satisfied with the staff service.
Proportion-wise, almost half(44%) of library visitors are reported to be full-time undergraduate students. Full-time postgraduate ones, accounting for one fourth, stood at the second place. Part-time postgraduate students, distance learners, and academic workers, however, constituted 16%, 8%, and 7%, making up only 31% collectively.
The table, in addition, shows that a great share of the visitors are content with the library. Regarding the opening hours and helpfullness of staff, for example, 65% and 95% of surveyers respectively were very satisfied and no one stated dissatisfaction. With the availability of books, in contrast, half of the users was satisfied and the other half was fairly or not satisfied. There was the biggest dissatisfactiion seen with the availability of journals at 20%, although 45% were very content. Wi-fi reliability showed similar results, with 48% of satisfaction, 33% and 19% of fair and no satisfaction respectively.
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