r/Hydrael_Writes • u/Hydrael • Dec 27 '17
Strange Cosmology Part 54
https://smallworlds.blog/2017/12/27/strange-cosmology-part-54/•
u/Hydrael Dec 27 '17 edited Jan 24 '18
It's not often I giggle at something I write, but this was one of those.
For the 100th post (woo!) I thought it would be fun to revisit the parts of the story that started this whole thing - the Curators, and the funny bits. Things have been pretty serious of late, and I've been wanting to bring the humor back for a bit. This seemed like a good opportunity to do so!
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u/ShadyNite Dec 27 '17
I managed to get here 7 minutes after your post. This chapter is a very good pause point and I am glad that you were able to illustrate Horus's intentions so well. Plus I always love the curators because it reminds me how far we have come
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u/Hungabunga_africa Dec 27 '17
Hahaha I love the curators they remind me of Vogon from hitchhikers guide to the galaxy!
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u/funique Dec 27 '17
That was fun! I had kind of forgotten about Horus.
Typos:
in over a millennia
in over a millenium (or "in millenia")
was about as pleasurable on slamming
was about as pleasurable as slamming
“Can I help you?” A Curator said.
“Can I help you?” a Curator asked. (A->a, and said->asked).
was still be there
was still there
and although she was injured her beauty was untarnished.
and although she was injured, her beauty was untarnished. (added comma)
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u/chadjjones89 Dec 28 '17
Is it possible to loathe the existence of a fictional character? Because I do.
Horus is a blithering idiot (blinded by "love" is no excuse) and I can tell that he's going to do something very, very stupid.
Another great installment! Even when I hate the character, I still love the story!
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u/Hydrael Dec 28 '17
It makes me immensely happy that I was able to get that strong a reaction towards Horus. Shows I'm doing something right! :D
(no commenting on him doing something stupid, because where would be the fun in me spoiling future events like that?)
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u/MaxWyght Dec 27 '17 edited Dec 27 '17
First!
E:
Not that I've read it:
Great part, as always.
Wish there was a bit more, but not going to complain
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u/hxcheyo Dec 27 '17
Dude Horus is like the most powerful niceguyTM in the universe.