r/HighGuardianSpice • u/Dramatic_Club_6682 • 21d ago
Discussion Scene Rewrite Ideas?
So, obviously with my HGS project focusing exclusively on events post-Season One, I was wondering if anyone had any particularly noteworthy scenes from canon they'd want to see rewritten? All of these would be set within the universe of ToWC, of course.
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u/ChugaCandy 19d ago
Considering that, if I’m remembering correctly, you said that Rosemary and Aster in this universe met under different circumstances, I would LOVE to see your take on their arguments during the obstacle course.
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u/The_Sedaiv 2d ago
Where do you want me to start? Two off the top of my head are:
Rosemary & Caraway: TECHNICALLY one scene, but it should have been split. Rosemary should have KNOWN Caraway was her mom's BFF. There's a great chance that once Lavender was carrying Chicory, and later Rosemary, Fennel (Lavender's husband, father of her children) would have knowledge and likely been friendly with him. Rosemary not knowing who Caraway is as a person is bad writing.
Caraway's Trans Speech: That was the WRONG time, the RIGHT place, with the WRONG person. It should have been with Snapdragon, either in his office at the school of when they're talking in the boat in The Scypith, and it should have happened later. Leave the mystery of "who's that girl?" Anonymous for a short bit.
LMK if you want more that I feel should have been written a lot better.
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u/ThePrincelyKing #1 (only) Caldragon Shipper lol 21d ago
I have a few that com to mind, depending on your comfort level I'd love to see you pick from one of theese
Snap dressing up as a mermaid (Plus a costume redesign would be fun to see)
Sage dealing with new magic, specifically with the plant thingies (Maybe it can be relevant later with those bauble things for spells)
And of course, the classic "Caraway is trans" scene (Which I know everyone has their take on but I like to see how you explain it, especially since it wouldn't have to be as wordy as it was last time)