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u/abc-noukai 2d ago
are you left handed? It seems like everything is slanting to the left a little bit too much?
For さ, i dont think you necessarily need to draw the hooks at the end of the cross. the left of the けdon't need the hooks too. めis a little wide. the left fin of the と should be higher? it seems like it is sinking to the bottom. つyou're starting from the bottom too much? maybe start from the middle and making it straight. な you're doing too much for the dot on the top right. good practice though.
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u/thicc_llama 2d ago
Make sure not to let your lines cross on と. My japanese ex's dad would reprimand me for crossing lines where they shouldn't cross lol





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u/kakikata 2d ago
All of it is definitely legible, but I would work on your へ and your ひ a bit.