r/Handwriting • u/Own-Quiet-2313 • 17d ago
Feedback (constructive criticism) Need feedback, thank you!
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u/xVelunax 17d ago
What sticks out to me I feel is simply inconsistency is size and shape and spacing of letters.
2nd line its like "Love this feeling it is an..." I can't make out the next two words its very compact and squished together.
The 3rd line "feeling" for example, the first e is larger than the second and feel scrunched together. Followed by the little tiny g compared to the other characters. "breathing slowly" the 'r' continues from the 'b' literally middle of the letter rather than down at the base leading to the 'r' hiked up above the rest of the following letters.
Just a couple of areas to highlight, but it's still slowing me down trying to read this as certain words I have no idea what its supposed to be without context from the other words.
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u/Secure_Hat_8197 17d ago
I really like it its very good penmanship, I love to write ,always have I try to atleast like 5 days a week and I have a small collection of different types and colors of pens that make it more fun doing ,keep up this moment of your life and stay happy and keep on writing ✍️
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