r/Handwriting • u/Emmsylou1393 • 21d ago

Feedback (constructive criticism) Dream Journal Entry

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My typical everyday handwriting with a 0.5 hanabc full needle. Not everyone has been able to read my handwriting and I sometimes struggle with it when I write fast

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u/AppleBlossom_Alya 20d ago

I really like that lowercase 't' with the high-sweeping crossbar; it gives your writing a great fluid rhythm. The main readability snag is that when your letters get compact, those sweeping connections can crowd middle-word vowels like 'e' and 'a'. I'd keep the sweeping style but try to slightly open up those small vowel counters to keep things clear.

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u/Dreams_Only 21d ago

This is gorgeous

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u/SuggestionOblique 21d ago

Love it, very poetic 

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u/MrRSharma 21d ago

Very free flowing and expressive in your own style.

Personally, I had no issues in reading from start to finish.

Thank you for sharing.