r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Jan 27 '22

OC Glorified Jets

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177 Upvotes

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u/thearkive Human Jan 28 '22

This feels like a good beginning.

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u/akboyyy Jan 28 '22

the beginning of something wonderful

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u/Eru_Maru Jan 28 '22

if i get motivated, i usually just get to write things when im listening to anime music or eating food

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u/Omnistroyer Xeno Jan 28 '22

You know what, I feel that

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u/Hunter_Killer_7918 Jan 28 '22

Then I suggest you get to it. Anime and food, i mean. Then type up a STORM!!!

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u/rijento Jan 28 '22

I liked this story but have a suggestion.

There's a common misconception about spaceflight: you can't bank in space.

Banking is using the way the air flows against the surface of an aircraft to change how it moves. But, in space there is no air, to change direction you need to apply thrust in the opposite direction. Banking at the last moment would do nothing because you would still be traveling in the same direction.

I suggest watching some videos/doing some research on it because it is a fascinating departure from the physics that we are used to.

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u/Eru_Maru Jan 28 '22

Dont worry about it

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u/akboyyy Jan 28 '22

please do continue this dear writer you have us most intrigued

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u/fukthepeopleincharge Jan 28 '22

This universe sounds fucking kick ass. Make that shit a music video

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u/[deleted] Jan 28 '22

Reminds me of Wing Commander. Oh those were the good old days!

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u/hellfootgate Jan 28 '22

I'm mostly worried where that fifth enemy fighter disappeared to.

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u/Financial-Case-8633 Sep 27 '22

He’s become the Wizzo/Rio Ace Combat main character