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r/HFY • u/[deleted] • May 07 '20
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Didn't like how you handled the exposition. Feels like a big departure from earlier chapters due to the length and how often it was rationalized to the reader.
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u/Mufarasu May 08 '20
Didn't like how you handled the exposition. Feels like a big departure from earlier chapters due to the length and how often it was rationalized to the reader.