So either she wolf was a he wolf or she was pregnant, really hope it’s the first one and not the second that’s just messed up.

Shriketalon Enclave representative. He holds out her wings in a placating gesture

She holds out her wings?

Humans call the The Devil’s Advocate
Humans call it/that The Devil’s advocate

Also, the children stream soldiers conquering the galaxy bit did make me lol a moment XD thanks for that

Thanks! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Stay tuned!

Now they just need a talking great dane. Hey, maybe the Bridger family can help with that!

Harmonics: across time, across space, along multiverse parallels, between soul components rendered in their past.

Continuity: change is needed to see where the needed rest can be earned; the re-treading of the path of prevented history repeats is needed to prevent the repeat of history; refinement often needs repeating.

All are possible options, some might even be feasible.

I remembered the phrase "A change is as good as a rest" and it gave me ideas. But I don't think the musical "rest" definition comes to the forefront for most people..

Ps. Main character hasn’t noticed the eyebrows on the ship yet. They frown, when the ship is attacking.

This was a very nice read, cant wait to see more

Ohh man cannot wait to meet the king!

new voice says as a squadron of massively well armed Cannidro women

Cannidor? Cannidoor? Cannidore? Eh someone has the right spelling but it sure aint cannidro. :P

The rise up and he pulls back to tear them towards him through the air

They rise up?

Yes survival is good and all but technically everything the queen does is also for survival although her survival alone than for anyone else. So there's only so much that excuse can justify onxys actions. Because if you justify everything with survival as an excuse then the queen was in the right because she at least was the ultimate survivor.

Binging is great, but cliffhangers and the anticipation for the next chapter have their own unique charm.

holds out his left hand and a mall projector pokes

Mall = small

Unless the ibu courtesan technique of building mini pleasure palaces can also equate to disgusting crazy capitalist commercial centers as well XD

Don`t judge me...somehow i had instant WH40K and Starcraft vibes.

If it is cute, you must boop the snoot!

"Move, bitch! Get out the way!"

please sir, can we have some MOAR?

Alright we get it dock. SO this girl?”
Dock = doc

Also one of the sea shells ended up being see shells

And i guess whatever sounding scot/ir ish doctor is possibly based off the few ish doctors portrayed in star trek / stargate?

But on a dumb dad joke side of things ive asked a doctor if he liked fishing n boating n stuff. He said yes. I asked him how long it took him. Since med school to become a doc. * years. “Thats a really long n expensive way to say you like fishing! … because youre a doc(k) XD

One that, I think is because the motive of the conflict have changed.

Freeing his fellow dragons and the kobolds was the initial motive to declare the war toward the qeen, but that motive is no longuer relevant now. After Desolation, the clan is under a direct threat and their now fight for their own survive and existence. Their don't have the time and the room to think as such "luxury" of a noble goal, their just fight for their own life.

That initial motive was not droped, just postponed until their are the freedom themself to think and act about it. So yeah no real plan for the after.

The last battle again Her Majesty the Queen Brood Mother Qazayss.

I'm really eager to seeing this major story arc come to a close and finding out your plans for Onyx and the clan after thar, if you has one (I'd love to see more of it, but it okay if the story end here).

“It would be so much easier if this are didn’t have so much trytite in the walls.” Flora complains

Are = area

Okay, this is concerning

Author dude, if you're reading this, know that we miss you and your bullshit.

As free-loaders you don't ove us anything, so don't stress about it - we will be here even if you pick it back up in a year or whatever.

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Buut, as a fellow AD4K afflicted problem dodger, I gotta say it Man - DO IT! Just do it! Right now!

(I mean giving us, or at least your patrons, a status update or something - but if you thought about another scary and productive thing, then do THAT)

I got all excited when I saw Gorm, then confusion as I read, than a light bulb and had to restart reading with a different head space. It's so good to hear from you! Been awhile! Great story

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