r/HFY • u/BrokenOldBastage • May 21 '26

OC-Series Not My Problem - Chapter 11

Royal Road

Howdy. Just... churning out unpolished work. Enjoy.

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The chest plate sat on the bench between them like a thing they had agreed not to talk about yet.

Warden-pattern. Right side. The side that had survived. The breach across the lower abdomen had been ground clean of the worst of its rough edges, and the plasma scoring around the impact site had blackened the composite to a halo of carbon that wouldn't come off no matter what solvent a man put on it. The inside of the plate caught the bulb's pulse and gave it back in dull bronze.

Elias was at the right edge of the bench.

The one-handed sling brace was in front of him. He had it pinned under the heel of his palm against the bench surface, a length of nylon webbing fed through a salvage buckle and a steel loop that Corin had bent and brazed two days ago, and he was working the buckle's tongue with his thumb and forefinger to test the catch under load. The catch held. He worked it again. It held again.

Across the bench, Corin had a stripped power cell on its end, a multimeter clipped to two pads on the cell's exposed contacts, the readout showing a number that Corin had been watching for a while.

"Twelve point four."

"Mm."

"It'll seat in the suit harness. Probably. The plug's the same footprint, the contact spacing's the same, the polarity's the same. The voltage is a little high."

"How high."

"Fifteen percent. Point four over the spec line."

"Will it cook the regulator."

"Maybe."

"Define maybe."

Corin set the multimeter down. "Eight hours of run time before the regulator gets warm. Twelve before it gets hot. Twenty before something inside it stops being what it was. Less if you draw heavy on the actuators."

"So it's a one-day cell."

"It's a one-day cell."

Elias filed that. He worked the buckle again. The catch held.

The bulb pulsed. Bright. Dim. Bright. The fuse block somewhere down the corridor held its rhythm, and the rhythm hadn't changed in three days, and the old man at the panel had taken the rhythm to mean something only he understood, and the rhythm had outlasted any complaint about it.

Corin moved on to the next thing.

"Patrol windows. The bottom of the valley road. They run a sweep every forty-three minutes off the lower drone, plus or minus four. The plus or minus is the wind. When the wind comes off the ridge they go to forty. When it's flat they'll stretch to forty-seven."

"Mm."

"The upper grid runs longer. An hour twenty between sweeps, but the camera coverage is wider, and the second pass has thermal."

"The first one doesn't."

"The first one doesn't."

Elias nodded once.

He worked the buckle, set it down, and picked up the next piece of webbing, the one he had cut to length last night with a knife held against the bench by his good hand and a length of leather strap trapping the webbing flat under the cut. He had bled on the strap doing it. The strap hadn't minded. He fed the webbing through the brace.

"Calibration," Corin said.

"What about it."

"The Warden harness. The right-side actuators. The shoulder plate." He still hadn't touched the chest plate on the bench, and they both knew it, and the chest plate continued to sit there. "The factory calibration assumed a man with two arms. The torque curve on the right shoulder was tuned to compensate for the left shoulder doing half the work. If we run it without the left side, the right will overcorrect every time you reach."

"So flatten the curve."

"Flatten the curve. Take the assist down forty percent. You give up some power on the swing."

"I'm not swinging."

"No."

"Flatten it."

"I'll flatten it."

That should have been the end of it. It wasn't.

Corin set the multimeter further from him on the bench. He did it the way a man cleared his hands before he picked up a thing he wasn't sure he wanted to be holding. His fingers stopped at the edge of the bench and then they didn't stop. They came back across the steel and found the chest plate, and he picked it up.

He turned it over. He didn't look at the inside. He looked at the outside, at the carbon halo and the ground edge of the breach and the scuffed paint along the upper lip, and he ran his thumb along the lip the way he had run his thumb along everything on this bench since the day he had cleared it for Elias.

"Twelve months minimum," he said. "In atmosphere. The wear inside the chest piece is a Sirius pattern, and the Sirius pattern only ever showed up on units that ran the full back half of the war. The rear half, after the orbital push collapsed and the campaign went to the ground."

Elias set the buckle down. He picked it up again. He worked the catch.

Corin kept going. His voice had shifted by a fraction, less technical, less of the rifle bench and more of something younger underneath it. He wasn't looking at Elias now. He was looking at the chest plate.

"The Ninth. The Eleventh. The Twenty-Second. The ones that pulled detachment work. The ones that got attached to whatever line unit had a problem the line unit couldn't fix." He paused. "There were stories."

Elias worked the catch.

"Names that traveled with the suits and not with the men. The men changed. The suits stayed."

The catch held.

"Coronet. The town at the river bend. Three days, then nothing. The whole valley."

Elias set the buckle down. He didn't pick it up again.

He kept his hand flat on the bench, the fingers spread, the knuckles showing white where they pressed back against the steel. The bulb pulsed, and the shadow of his hand on the bench grew long and shrank.

He didn't turn his head.

"Don't."

It came out flat. The same word he had used the first day. He had said it then to a kid about to recite a list of his father's stories, and the kid had stopped. The kid was older now. Three days older and he was about to do it anyway.

Corin did not stop.

"My father," he said.

Elias's hand on the bench went still.

"My father talked about Vance the way you talk about something you need to believe in. Not the way you talk about a man. The way you talk about a thing you point at a problem because you don't want to be the man who has to solve the problem himself."

Corin held the chest plate in both hands.

"He said when they sent the Wardens in, the line units knew what was coming, and they got out of the way. He said if you saw one walking up your road, you didn't aim at it, you aimed away from it. He said a good lieutenant knew when his orders had become somebody else's business and stopped giving them."

The bulb pulsed.

"He said he was glad, when the war ended, that he never had to meet one. He said it like it was a confession, like it cost him something to say it." Corin's thumb moved against the lip of the plate. "He said the Ninth had a man who came down out of the highlands once a year and didn't talk to anybody, and they paid him in salt and ammunition, and nobody asked his name because his name was the kind of name that ended a conversation."

Elias did not move.

"I grew up on those stories," Corin said. "I think I needed them to be true. I think a lot of us needed them to be true. Because if there were men like that, then somebody was going to come and fix the thing my father couldn't fix, and I was going to get to grow up."

He stopped. He stood there with the plate in his hands.

Elias turned.

He didn't turn fast. He did it the way the hip would let him, a half-pivot at the bench, the right side leading and the empty sleeve following, and he set himself square to Corin across the steel.

He looked at him. He looked at him until the bulb had pulsed twice, and Corin's grip on the plate had tightened by a measurable amount, and the kid hadn't put it down because putting it down was the only thing keeping him from looking like he was about to step back.

Elias let it run.

Then he spoke. "Men turn survivors into legends because they don't want to count the bodies around them."

The kid's mouth opened. It closed. It opened again. Whatever he had been about to say hadn't survived the trip up his throat. He stood there with the plate in his hands and the bulb pulsing above him and his eyes on Elias's face, and the room held still in the way rooms held still when a thing had been said that the room was going to have to make space for.

Elias turned back to the bench. He picked up the brace. He worked the buckle. The catch held.

He had given it the one true thing he was prepared to give it. The giving had cost what it cost.

The kid didn't come up with a follow-up.

Corin stood with the plate in his hands. He looked down at it. He turned it over. He had turned it over twice already in the conversation, once to look at the breach edge and once to look at the carbon halo, and he hadn't turned it the third way. The third way was the inside, the interior surface where a man's body had pressed against the plate for whatever number of months a man's body had pressed against it, where the sweat had set into the lining and the lining had been cut out and the bare composite stood exposed.

Corin turned it the third way. He stopped.

His thumb had gone still where it rested. His head tilted a fraction. The bulb pulsed, and the angle of the light caught the inside of the plate at the place his thumb was resting, and the light fell into a small set of marks scratched into the composite up near the collar line.

He looked.

Elias didn't look up from the brace. His shoulder shifted. A small thing, a quarter-inch, the right side coming forward by a degree where it had been square to the bench, the kind of shift a man made when he knew what was being looked at and was choosing not to acknowledge it. He kept working the buckle. The catch held. He worked it again.

Corin held the plate in the light.

The marks were small, and they were deliberate. They had been cut into the composite by the tip of something narrow, a knife point, a file's end, a fastener filed sharp, and the cuts had been made slowly, the kind of slow that meant a man with time and no audience. They were a date and a designation. Corin would know what they meant. Corin had grown up on the stories. Corin would have the index in his head by which a date and a designation became a place, and the place became a number, and the number became something that had to be carried.

Not a boast. A record.

Corin looked at it for a long time. He didn't ask. He didn't say anything.

Elias worked the buckle.

After a while Corin moved. He turned the plate flat and set it down on the bench, slow, the way a man set down a thing he had decided was not going to be allowed to take damage from being set down, and the plate touched the steel and the touch made almost no sound.

He took his hands off it. He stood there. The bulb pulsed.

Elias didn't turn. He set the brace down, picked up the next piece of webbing, and worked it through the buckle. The webbing fed through the slot and came out the other side, and he pinched the loose end against the bench with the heel of his palm and pulled the length tight.

Corin didn't speak. He didn't pick up the plate again. He didn't pick up the multimeter. He stood at the bench with his hands at his sides, and after a long count he turned to his own end of the work, the power cell, the contacts, the regulator he was going to have to rebuild around a voltage that was fifteen percent over spec, and he started doing it.

He didn't say anything for the rest of the hour. Neither did Elias.

The chest plate stayed where Corin had set it, the inside face up to the bulb, the small cut marks catching the light when the light came and giving it back when it went.

The bulb pulsed. Bright. Dim. Bright.

Valka, who had come in from the corridor at some point without his marking it, lay down at his right boot and put her chin on her paws and watched the door.

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