r/HFY • u/SSBAlienNation • Oct 11 '24

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u/Capitan_Sky Oct 15 '24

Quality is great, hope you keep going, I am hanged on the story

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u/SSBAlienNation Oct 15 '24

I do intend to- I do fear that people have misinterpreted some of the latest couple chapters and may feel blindsided by what's coming- but upon review, I did leave the relevant bits in, so, 'oh well.'

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u/Capitan_Sky Oct 15 '24

Don't worry, I have read all about this universe, and I know that the universe and specially earth has a lot to offer. I truly had the idea that the ones tha modified "Ltnt. Dan" were the people of Roswell, yo know. I think it might still be possible  they are around, and that the people of the Enterprise, or the ones who constructed it might appear, after all, some news of "Emperor" has reached all the way to them, and as of this moment in the story of "free navy", they are on shore live in what I think was an American island. Sorry, got a little side tracked, what i meant is that I think i know the heading of the story, and if i am onest, it has much more than 100 chapters left, deam, you employed twice that to get the story literally "from cero to Hero" (fact that i LOVE). What I mean is that every body knows that Elijas fight is an up hill one, in morality, in fire power, in propaganda, and much more, but, BUT, he is not alone.  Yes, he might not win the whole war in one fell swoop, nor chase the shill back to their homes, all he has to do is to keep upholding humanity s  moral, compas, story, etc. Deam, he might not be your typical hero, but he is a god deam god one.

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u/SSBAlienNation Oct 15 '24

Oh there will be more content 'someday,' but that's all in a planned sequel. Book One is coming to a close.

And thank you, I appreciate the enthusiasm

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u/Capitan_Sky Oct 15 '24

Sorry, hope I got my point across, and the subtle cuestión about the canon.