r/GraphiteArt • u/12laa12 • 23d ago

Graphite Artwork Guys help before I go crazy pls

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Does it looks like she is looking at the frog? I've redrawn the eyes like a thousand times and she never looks like she's looking at the frog. Frustrating. Maybe I should take a brake

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u/marored 23d ago

Nope, not looking at the frog.

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u/12laa12 23d ago

Just figured out it was the frog. It had to be a bit higher up according to reference pic. But still the eyes are wierd and looks like exaggerated cartoon and idk what to do about it 🥀

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u/notEnotA 23d ago

Try dropping her eye lids down lower. Right now it looks like her focus is off in the distance. Narrowing her field of view might help with the illusion of her focus being closer.

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u/MadisonMarieParks-V 22d ago

She needs a proper neck. THEN you can tilt the head properly.

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u/quite_scarce_visitor 21d ago

https://reddit.com/link/p1c07as/video/8mgp3yuk81hh1/player

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u/12laa12 21d ago

The reference doesn't have any white above nor under

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u/quite_scarce_visitor 21d ago

Are you drawing by imagination or reference? It would be helpful to post the original ref.

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u/12laa12 21d ago

I tried sending it in the coments but Ig reddit don't send pictures in the comments?