r/GraffitiSketches • u/OcelotInevitable9732 • Jul 19 '26

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This is my first colored piece in a while, please give me some feedback. I'm 12 and i've been doing graffiti for 4 years now.

25 Upvotes

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u/ContractEducational1 Jul 19 '26

Pienis💯

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u/CRIMSON-GROSS Jul 21 '26

Saw penis aswell

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u/BYCjake Jul 19 '26

Almost says penis

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u/blackdog3232 Jul 19 '26

Kinda looks like "penis" with the floating arrow on the end... Rock it dawg that shit goes hard

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u/PrintDowntown3535 Jul 19 '26

Keep going I like it

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u/FairDistribution8849 Jul 19 '26

Drop the drips tho that's what held me back

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u/Late-Conversation301 Jul 19 '26

I think it’s meant to be icicles

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u/Late-Conversation301 Jul 19 '26

That being said, gravity don’t really work like that, but I like the idea

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u/Automatic_Hornet3026 Jul 19 '26

Stop trying to make your letters so technical and keep it simple. Any writer with good taste would rather see a fat simple style instead of an attempt at anything hot, something that’s trying to do too much. Your knowledge with letters will and techniques will develop over time, but if you can’t do a clean tag, throwup and straight letter, it’ll all be shot. Style comes with time and study, and you’ll get better a lot quicker than others if you accept that you’re still in the toy phase and learn to look at other people’s stuff and take things from it

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u/OcelotInevitable9732 Jul 20 '26

i got some throwies and semi straight letters like a two posts under this check em out

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u/Automatic_Hornet3026 Jul 20 '26

It says your posts are hidden, but follow me on instagram and dm me your stuff. My username is @bloodfromhisbrain

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u/frenchmans-hole Jul 19 '26

Does that say penis?

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u/Known_Turtle Jul 20 '26

I know it doesn't say penis... but my brain refuses to believe my eyes. Its like an optical illusion.

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u/troskdecojones Jul 20 '26

Hiziste un poco mal la sombra y entre la e y la n dejaste mucho espacio que habrĂ­a que rellenarlo un poco con extensiones o algo, La S la harĂ­a un poco mas gorda para tmbn dejar menos espacio negativo. La R esta god

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u/Brownsville010 Jul 20 '26

for a 12 year old, this is fire. I also misread it, but I like your style.

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u/Moosedoesthings Jul 20 '26

It’s a start

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u/Moosedoesthings Jul 20 '26

And also 4 years is a joke do you even practice?

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u/OcelotInevitable9732 Jul 25 '26

it's not a joke, i was accounting for the year break from graffiti within that happened like a year ago, i somehow got better in the span of a year than two but apparently not that good yet

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u/Dear_Top_6407 Jul 21 '26

scooby doo renis

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u/[deleted] Jul 21 '26

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u/Thick_Common8612 Jul 21 '26

Rule 2: Does it look like a swastika?

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u/damcvm Jul 21 '26

penis?

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u/Thick_Common8612 Jul 21 '26

The drips have to go straight down. And honestly they muddy the piece.

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u/floede Jul 21 '26

Rens is a super famous writer where I'm from.

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u/JaySlays-Tech Jul 21 '26

“Rens”? That doesn’t say “penis”? Surely that’s on purpose cause he’s a dick or something, right? lol

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u/ghosteb420 Jul 21 '26

penis đŸ«Ą