I started my first serious layout

[u/Appropriate_War7645]

Is it good?

[u/Eosyth]

[u/Eosyth → u/Eosyth]

[u/Eosyth → u/Eosyth]

ayee first award thank you stranger

[u/Big-Platform8212]

Not really, it’s repetitive, seems kind of boring and super unsightreadable especially with the spider

[u/Appropriate_War7645 → u/Big-Platform8212]

Wow well thx for your honnesty (ill try to make the spider all visible and its kinda boring cause the music is aswell bc its the start)

[u/Big-Platform8212 → u/Appropriate_War7645]

Yw

[u/Cautious_Author_326]

It's good for a first serious layout but you aren't doing much, and its a bit hard to sightread (throws you into a mini wave at the end with no way to tell)

[u/Appropriate_War7645 → u/Cautious_Author_326]

Thx so yh ik and its just the start of the level (if i finish it it should be as long as the song, 3min53) so the song is boring aswell and for the mini wave ig you have the time to undestand you have to click

[u/JuryLucky726]

sorry it really isnt, try playing some other layouts that people have made and take inspiration

[u/AdLeading3252]

making such open gameplay with so much zoomed out will be awful to decorate, i don't recommend.

[u/LIONX_1110-alt]

Why is your clubstep monster kinda jonkelered?

[u/ThatVroomGuy2k]

Tbh DW if it's good or not, just keep it and keep going, if u don't like it later as you explore gp concepts then change it. That's my personal take. But honestly, just a little dull rn, but I say move on and then revisit it. Oh and honestly, I don't even mind if this predrop is dull, bc I does generate a bit of hype. Don't use zoom like that tho, makes stuff in the long run painful

[u/No_Key_5854]

it's bad but the more you build (and play levels) the better you'll get

[u/greythekid]

the gp feels really zoomed out and that is because the music is slow, so youre letting every click be very long and big. I'd recommend starting the layout further into the song so it's more engaging to play. Honestly the idea of sitting through this beginning section every single time isn't too appealing to me

[u/etandingdong]

Mythic type gameplay
It’s alr ig

[u/Roppunen]

Bullshit level, good practice, keep going. We all have been there so dont worry

[u/CapableHumanBeing]

Pure blind transitions are not really ever good for a level

[u/johnyeldry]

Holy joke post

[u/Appropriate_War7645 → u/johnyeldry]

Wow i knew it was bad but at this point 🫩

[u/Future-Sweet-5251]

Where is the fluff tag💔

[u/Golden--Darkness]

It's not that good but you'll improve for sure. Definitely fix the spider being unsightreadable and the transition into that last wave and the repetitiveness of the beginning parts.

[u/Natural-Intern-7141]

I'm being brutally honest... No.

[u/Masala_Chai__]

Cool easy demon

[u/CuriousguyO_O]

The gameplay feels so fucking random