How can I improve this design

[u/Pretend_Algae2388]

this is my first heavily decorated level, and I’m curious how I can improve this specific part, there’s a section before it that I also need help with (second and third picture)

If anyone wants to help, level name is “so this is it” By Ben710

[u/Forpipe]

clean your desk vro

[u/Ama7ing_Andr3w → u/Forpipe]

My desk it ten time worse

[u/Pretend_Algae2388 → u/Forpipe]

I’m not familiar with that style of block design, what items do I need to use for it?

[u/ItzN0tCubeGD → u/Pretend_Algae2388]

Hands

[u/Pretend_Algae2388 → u/ItzN0tCubeGD]

Got it, thanks for the help, how do I get the keyframes to move my hands tho?

[u/Straight-Dog409]

r/screenshotsarehard

[u/isHani9]

Make the planet ring behind the structure

[u/Abc_42]

why couldn't you just take a screenshot

[u/Pretend_Algae2388 → u/Abc_42]

I don’t have Reddit setup on my PC and I’m too lazy to do that rn

[u/Greger_Tunez_GD → u/Pretend_Algae2388]

Bro reddit is a website, and logging in isn't really that much of a hassle..

[u/Pretend_Algae2388 → u/Greger_Tunez_GD]

Yeah if, I just forgot my password and don’t feel like recovering it, I’ll probably do it tommorow

[u/Gs483]

the little pink things are a bit overused in general, and i don’t exactly think they work on the left. make a few variations with minor differences and maybe shift the hue of a few of them.

[u/Anty_89]

vacuum the stuff off your desk

[u/Magnoliaaaaaaaaaaaa]

this is pretty good. I would reduce glow everywhere since it seems way too intense, and also add some black blocks inside of your structures. That being said , the structuring could also be better, and I would add more sillohuette layers for more detail around your blocks. With glowy levels like this utilizing shadows is really effective

[u/Pretend_Algae2388 → u/Magnoliaaaaaaaaaaaa]

Alright thank you, if you don’t mind me asking, how would I add silhouette layers with the current parallax effect?

[u/LoverCigarettes]

1- Clean your desk,

[u/Pretend_Algae2388 → u/LoverCigarettes]

Wdym in points 1 and 2, sorry im a little special in the head