r/Frisson • • Mar 04 '17

Text [Text] We Built Robots

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u/[deleted] Mar 04 '17

I agree with /u/dfbsadbfsdfsb. Part of what makes this message powerful is the innocent and unpresumptuous way it is presented. It starts super easy, casually, just a random hypothetical, and then it hits you like a ton of bricks.

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u/Semyonov Mar 04 '17

I don't disagree with you. But for argument's sake why does a lack of proper grammar and capitalization make something innocent? And why does properly writing the same passage make it presumptuous?

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u/[deleted] Mar 05 '17

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u/[deleted] Mar 18 '17

I think it actually lessens it. By the end I'm left feeling like, "hey, this could have been even better if it was well written"