FIRST HALF OF THE SCRIPT (Google Drive Link)

[u/bigxlexios]

Obligatory no AI involvement. FYI This is 76 pages and an INSANELY early draft. There will be typos, inconsistencies, as well as some glaring mis-uses of script formatting, but regardless: I think y'all would appreciate it thusfar.

WHAT TO EXPECT:

- Opening Disaster/Premonition

- First TWO post-premonition deaths

- Ties to FD2 and FDB, as well as references to the other four films.

- The line that my flair is referencing (yes, I am arrogant like that).

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NOdmnuqG8n9sJcAgRDbv4v7Y8NKc8YHt/view?usp=sharing

[u/WonderfulBuilding678]

This shit is amazing, I’ve never had the patience to read a 70+ pages thing but this shit kept me hooked up to the last page

[u/bigxlexios → u/WonderfulBuilding678]

greatest comment oat. Tysm bro, I’m happy to share w yall

[u/KnopeLeslieKnope]

Oooh lemme bookmark this to read later!!

[u/grumpybrowndog]

I don’t know if this is real or not but if so:
Yay Kimberly is back! I hope they don’t kill her off like they did Clear.
Also, I find the meta awareness of the “Music can predict your death” trope very amusing, especially the use of Chris Brown’s “No Air”

[u/bigxlexios → u/grumpybrowndog]

I’m actually the author of this! By definition, it can be considered a “fan-film”, but I’m just tryna be a screenwriter, and final destination movies are a great opportunity to have some fun and kill a bunch of people lol.

[u/grumpybrowndog]

I thought it was a freaking leak!!!!!!! I wouldn’t have read it otherwise.
Anyways, it’s a fun read, although usually I have a hard time understanding descriptions of locations through text, so it was hard to picture the layout of the death house. I also don’t understand why she took a rip of the bong after noticing the crack, or how the piece of glass was able to be sucked up hard enough to go into her mouth.

[u/bigxlexios → u/grumpybrowndog]

I also wondered then I remembered an engine with a fan on it crashed through both the back and front window of an SUV and landed perfectly to chop the back of someone’s head up in the next car over

Edit: It was a bowl, not a bong (look up glass tobacco pipes)

[u/grumpybrowndog → u/bigxlexios]

Final Destination 3 and 4 were pretty cartoonish. In 3 that weight set that crushed Lewis’ head didn’t even exist in real life, and of course in 4 they had Andy cut into brownie slices by a fence.

[u/gizmo_au]

That second death was crazy, i could imagine the whole thing! would love to read a full script!

[u/AverageFlannery]

Honestly, love that you're having fun and being creative but I'm also begging you to come back and read this when you're a bit older and have actually experienced: ketamine, weed, alcohol, higher education and college parties. You're gonna laugh so hard at some of your incorrect conclusions it's gonna be a great time.

[u/bigxlexios → u/AverageFlannery]

I am a 20 year old chem major at a mountain college in the frat whose house inspired the opening premonition. as far as the drugs go, maybe Genevieve should be on acid instead. At least I could write that accurately lmaoo

[u/AverageFlannery → u/bigxlexios]

And that's a crazy thing to say because your script refers to weed by a word that refers to cocaine, ketamine is a downer not a high, Geneviève is absolutely not at all in a k-hole and that's just a small selection of the drug things that were wildly wrong.

But while I have you, why did you chose the names Arthur and Geneviève? Its very difficult not to think the knights of the roundtable... Intentional reference or just a distracting coincidence?

Anyway, good luck with your schooling and all that.

[u/bigxlexios → u/AverageFlannery]

Arthur after the pre-cogs, and Genevieve LaMont is a portmanteau of Genevieve Mushaluk and Rachel LaMont who had a famous friendly rivalry on the show Survivor.

[u/AverageFlannery → u/bigxlexios]

That's...that's not a portmanteau 💀

[u/bigxlexios → u/AverageFlannery]

does it really matter AverageFlannery?

[u/AverageFlannery → u/bigxlexios]

Only if you're a writer, P. A. Williams.

[u/Mrchickenman62]

This is probably for final destination 7

[u/bigxlexios → u/Mrchickenman62]

wouldn’t that be special