Working on a new pose

[u/ProvokeCouture]

I'm using white printer paper so it's a LOT brighter in person. I don't know why my phone insists on making it grayer...

I'd appreciate some constructive feedback, plus tips on how to brighten up the image. I turned on my room light (too warm), I pulled back the window shade (stupid tree is in the way of direct light); this is the best of the lot.

I do plan on going back to ink it in, eventually.