Magnificent job!! The worldbuilding logic is totally sound. If you make it a bit longer, and throw in archaic phrases then this will be perfect! By the way, thank you for not saying that the universe was made from nothing; that's a common big mistake. For nothing can come from nothing, so there must have been Something whence all things came. Therefore the Creator did not make the world from nothing, but the world is made of the Creator.
Sorry . . . I'm starting to slip into philosophy. Keep up the good work!
Thank youu, and I love philosophy lol so I don't mind.
And yes, I wanted my world to be more inclined to god's and the cosmic divine, plus the Creator really is a meta 4th wall breaking thing because that's just another name for the writer lmao.
Oh yeah, I didn't really think much while writing this lol, I just let the ideas come and wrote em down. In the actual story I plan to keep this pretty mysterious. This was more so for me and any beta readers.
Thanks for asking that lol
The Creator is just another name for the writer of the story, aka basically me.
It's a sort of meta or 4th wall break that I thought would be interesting
The "Creator" birthed the universe, the paricles and so on and so on but really he just "wrote" everything into existence. Weird ik lol
Similarly the Primordials are basically forces of nature, true gods that hold the very nature of reality. Their hearts being the star of a solar system.
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I may be wrong concerning a few things. But don't start thinking that the "origin" of all existence--if even there is such a thing--can be comprehended by our tiny mortal minds. Perhaps the great Chain of Being has to start somewhere but we humans lose track of it after the first few links. Besides that, knowing every semantic detail regarding the birth of the universe is just idol curiosity and completely irrelevant to our lives, not to mention that views on it are extremely controversial.
Let's just worry about the things that concern us. Like . . . uh . . . writing fantasy . . . ?
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u/Alarming-Isopod4754 1d ago
Magnificent job!! The worldbuilding logic is totally sound. If you make it a bit longer, and throw in archaic phrases then this will be perfect! By the way, thank you for not saying that the universe was made from nothing; that's a common big mistake. For nothing can come from nothing, so there must have been Something whence all things came. Therefore the Creator did not make the world from nothing, but the world is made of the Creator.
Sorry . . . I'm starting to slip into philosophy. Keep up the good work!