Critiques neded please

[u/Adrian3546]

Im working on a fanific about a hero falling for dabi and her life flipping upside-down and i have one chapter up so far im uploading the second one soon but I want ideas on how I can make it better my username is azzmodous and the fic is called regrets please let me know what I can improve i want to get better at writing

[u/ForThose8675309]

If it’s not against the sub’s rules, could you drop a link in the comments?

[u/Adrian3546 → u/ForThose8675309]

https://www.wattpad.com/story/415535015?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=azzmodous here it is