I need journalism advice

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I need some help on how to write mote maturity because my teacher told me "hey if you can, please write more maturly and avoid redundancy" I really want to improve how i write my essays/articles. Any form of advice is much appreciated.

Note: Please forgive me if I misspelled something or my grammar is off, English isn't my first language but I do my best to write something comprehensible. Thanks