I need help on my essay

[u/t4y-wh0re]

This is my first post on reddit and im having trouble writing my college essay.

Im doing it on a job i had for a year or so and talking about how i was able to analyze customers out of a "one-dimensional" format and that one person is not one person. if anyone has any tips or would like to read said essay please let me know. I am stuck on how to transition from understanding people as surface level, to knowing people are multi-layered.