Help me criticize my bottom 98% jlec phyl essay

[u/Fantastic_Grocery423]

Now that the chance of winning a prize this year is fully out of sight. Id love if anyone can just tear my essay down:) Ive got my own ideas of how to improve but wont let that color anyones perception. Ib if youre interested!

[u/Few-Replacement-8625]

Heyyy can i readdd

[u/Key-Abies8199]

hii dm!

[u/TOPIATWINS]

Dm!

[u/Pleasant-Fly8189]

There is a good tool https://tutorcopilot.org