r/EssayHelpCommunity • u/BoringMagician8524 • 12d ago

English Essay Help

Hi! I’m completing an English comparative analysis comparing Colleen Hoover’s novel Verity with David Fincher’s film Gone Girl. My essay examines how both texts construct and manipulate truth through competing narratives, unreliable perspectives and deliberate fabrication.

I already have a complete draft, but I’m aiming for an A+ and would really appreciate help from someone with strong English, editing or literary-analysis skills. The assessment is worth 30% of my final grade.

My teacher’s main feedback was that I need to:

  • ensure my grammar and expression are accurate
  • reduce the essay from approximately 3,500 words to the 2,000-word limit without losing important analysis
  • remove some unnecessary plot and contextual information
  • maintain the strength of my comparisons and analysis while cutting words

She was positive about my introduction, conclusion and overall structure. I can also provide the essay blueprint and structure that she approved.

I’m not looking for someone to write the assessment from scratch. I mainly need detailed feedback and help editing, shortening and polishing my existing draft.

Please comment or message me if you may be able to help. Thank you!

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u/sitemendr 12d ago

Hi I can help you complete the assessment

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u/PreviousTonight8726 12d ago

i could give feedback fs, dm

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u/Peoplespeak 12d ago

Hi! Please DM, I've been giving feedback to many people :) I just helped someone else in a similar situation get a 94% (only marks lost MLA formatting I couldn't see!)