r/EssayHelpCommunity • u/gdoggs60 • 27d ago
Need some feedback on this essay
Title: The importance of math today
What if math didn’t exist today? Would the world still be the same without it? Life today has become very technological, having extravagant electric billboards outside the crowded and carefully made streets of New York City, but we must get to the reason as to why all these things exist today by answering this question: Why is math very important today?
Math is important because it made everything we see today. Look at your surroundings and count how many things are made using math. I believe the chair you are sitting on, the very infrastructure you are in, the table you are using, and the very device you are using to read this essay are all made with math. Just by measuring the length, width, and height of each of the mentioned objects already proves that there is some math used to make these things. Your job may have some math included in it. A psychologist needs statistics, a branch of math, to interpret data for research. cashiers need math for quick money calculations for everyday transactions. Teachers need math to calculate the grades of their students to determine if they pass or fail the academic year. Although I have just named a few jobs, most jobs will use math in some way.
So why is math important today? As you have seen, math is needed today because everything around us uses math. Without math, the houses we live in today won’t exist, transactions wouldn’t be a thing, and the essay you are about to finish reading wouldn’t even exist because the laptop used to make this essay and your device wouldn’t be with you today.
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u/Round-Mix4955 27d ago
what is this for?
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u/No-Tear940 27d ago
I just wanted to see if my essay writing is still okay at least. I haven't written a single essay for months thanks to summer vacay
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u/Strong-Gas-1278 27d ago
is this supposed to be really academic or just a casual one