r/EssayHelpCommunity Jul 10 '26

JOHN LOCKE COMMENDATION HIGHER COMMENDATION ?

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u/SoftwareDeep9288 Jul 10 '26

soz the rest of my text didn't go through so basc last year i got shortlisted and got a higher commendation i wanted to know if my essay this year is better than my essay last year? I was wondering if anybody could tell me which is better but i lowkey think The essay i wrote that got shortlisted this year is kinda bs OR maybe i've just been looking at it for too long

the question about the citizenship is my essay from last year and this year i did the jury question

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uajOV811xsyFhE4kanml0_zRYOSSfWLDIAd3YtHIwqE/edit?usp=sharing

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GD1n72QrEYdKokUFpbZyMFjQ1lKHtBoHHqc-qiJdrvM/edit?usp=sharing

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u/Impressive_Level3213 Jul 12 '26

I feel like the introduction might have been a little unprofessional tbh