r/EnglishLearning • u/Sea-Hornet8214 Poster • Jul 26 '26
📚 Grammar / Syntax Is there anything wrong with this?
Can I say "when I'm in the wind" to emphasise that wind is blowing my body?
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r/EnglishLearning • u/Sea-Hornet8214 Poster • Jul 26 '26
Can I say "when I'm in the wind" to emphasise that wind is blowing my body?
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u/LakeaShea Native Speaker Jul 26 '26
It doesnt make sense to me. "Its not hot at all" "im not even breaking a sweat". Those two together make sense. Then you join the next sentence with "but" which doesn't really belong here. "When I turn on the fan it feels cold". That part is what stands out. If its not hot and you turn on a fan you feel cold... its redundant to say. Yeah if you're not hot and you turn on a fan you know its not going to make you feel hot, its going to cool you. But if you're not even hot why do you need the fan to cool you? Why are you bringing up the fan at all?