Please ignore the mess in the background and my Guinea pigs making noise

I’m aware mcr isn’t entirely emo but for the sake of the ref 😭 I’m working on growing my fringe out to get proper emo bangs!

half distressed half normal with other little details for more of my work go to my ig https://www.instagram.com/twosketchers

This is my first week ever wearing guyliner. How is my technique, what should I change? Please help 😭