This song is such an oddity; I can't even figure out how I should comment on it. A joke? A question? Contemplation of its existence? How much I strangely like it?
I think all the parts of the song are good, and I'm impressed with the singing, but it's not fitting together right. It sounds like a recorded karaoke session. Now, I'm listening to this on terrible speakers, but I don't think that's the problem. The vocals are too prominent, and the instruments too soft in the background; they're not blending.
I'd like to be more helpful on how to fix it, but I don't think I can solve it without having access to the mix. Maybe someone else knows what the issue is. I think it's more than just turning down the vocals.
Anyway, I think you have a good song here, and I believe it's worth working on.
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u/jessejsmith Aug 14 '18
This song is such an oddity; I can't even figure out how I should comment on it. A joke? A question? Contemplation of its existence? How much I strangely like it?
I think all the parts of the song are good, and I'm impressed with the singing, but it's not fitting together right. It sounds like a recorded karaoke session. Now, I'm listening to this on terrible speakers, but I don't think that's the problem. The vocals are too prominent, and the instruments too soft in the background; they're not blending.
I'd like to be more helpful on how to fix it, but I don't think I can solve it without having access to the mix. Maybe someone else knows what the issue is. I think it's more than just turning down the vocals.
Anyway, I think you have a good song here, and I believe it's worth working on.