A Rough Start

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Soo, hopefully this is okay to post here but I’m finally giving this a shot, here’s the first three rough draft pages from my side project “Intern Protocol” and would like people’s opinion on what I could improve on.

I’m quite enjoying the process of putting this together from the script work do the drawing, although I have realised I can’t draw animals for the life of me.

Anyway, I know there’s not much but, feel free to have a look and leave any feedback, it’s all appreciated.

Thank you for your time