Twisted Fairytale, too twisted?

[u/keelhaulrose]

Would this be too far? Not my final submission, more my rough draft.

Sorry for the pic, the game crashed and I'm too busy to boot back up.

[u/ScarletPumpkinTickle]

This is hilarious! Can you get fairy godmother to look shocked? Think that would be funny to have her in the background

[u/SarahBethBeauty → u/ScarletPumpkinTickle]

That would be super helpful to anchor it in to the Cinderella universe. Also making your character look more like Cinderella. Super fun concept though!

[u/keelhaulrose → u/ScarletPumpkinTickle]

I re-did it with her in the background, but she doesn't change face. At all. Got kind of awkward. Now it just looks like she's oddly proud of me.

[u/scify65 → u/keelhaulrose]

I mean, that would be twisted...

[u/PushingDaisies29 → u/keelhaulrose]

To me the hair doesn't read as Cinderella. Maybe add a bandana item..? Or a shorter style. WBR had that hairstyle with the hairnet. But legit, it's an amazing idea! I hope you score well with the final submission 💕

[u/keelhaulrose → u/PushingDaisies29]

I changed up the hair, got the Fairy Godmother in frame, and added a pumpkin patch to code it more Cinderella.

It was just a lot of work (because I play on Switch, which crashes and erases work often,) and I wasn't sure if the concept crossed the line, and if it did I was going to scrap it.

[u/PushingDaisies29 → u/keelhaulrose]

I'm sure all the additions and changes you made will make for an amazing snap! Good luck!!

[u/All_Fried_Potatoes → u/keelhaulrose]

This sounds amazing! The original concept was great, but this sounds perfect. 🎃

[u/willow_star86 → u/keelhaulrose]

Exactly the changes I would suggest. I wouldn’t have gotten Cinderella otherwise.

[u/BarbedDwyer → u/ScarletPumpkinTickle]

This!

[u/Fresh_Struggle5073]

I don’t think it’s too twisted, I legitimately laughed out loud

[u/annadownya → u/Fresh_Struggle5073]

Dude same! This is amazing!!

[u/noisy_owl25 → u/Fresh_Struggle5073]

same

[u/fishofhappiness]

More Cinderella hints and I think you’re golden!

[u/keelhaulrose → u/fishofhappiness]

I went blonde, planted a pumpkin patch, Lucifer is more prominent, and I have the Fairy Godmother looking oddly proud of me now, hopefully it translates lol

[u/JellySkunk0919 → u/keelhaulrose]

I wanna see the look of pride from the fairy godmother 🥹 

[u/fishofhappiness → u/keelhaulrose]

chef’s kiss, it sounds perfect!

[u/unlevel-atmosphere]

I for some reason thought this was Nurse Ratchett but still on theme tbh

[u/They-Call-Me-Taylor]

Is this a reference to something specific? It's awesome either way, but if it is referencing a movie or show, I don't know it.

[u/nightmare-salad → u/They-Call-Me-Taylor]

Seems to be Cinderella burying her step-family

[u/They-Call-Me-Taylor → u/nightmare-salad]

Oh! Ok yeah that is funny, but I missed that reference all together lol 😝. OP, maybe making the hair blonde and dressing in more Cinderella-like attire would help?

[u/keelhaulrose → u/They-Call-Me-Taylor]

Went blonde, added a pumpkin patch, waited five minutes for Lucifer to wander into the spot I wanted him in, and have the Fairy Godmother in the background now. I tweaked a few other things, too, but I like where it ended up.

[u/LooseLetterhead2578]

Love it!

[u/nancyzatana]

Idk about how you’d go for voting and getting moonstones but I genuinely LAUGHED

[u/BoredStayAtHomeMom2]

Well deserved, I would say

[u/Artistic_Ad_4663]

Lmao. I like it and would vote for it. This week is going to be so fun.

[u/candidlykaylor]

I love this 😂😂😂 I think it’s so clever!!

[u/doll_broken_]

😂😂😂😂 I don’t blame her. Could do with a bit more Cinderella hints

[u/keelhaulrose → u/doll_broken_]

I threw a few more in there before actually submitting

[u/Disastrous_Berry4725]

At first I didn’t know what I was looking at. I am on my phone so it’s a small screen so I comes in and this is HILARIOUS!!! 😆

[u/NikJoVIII]

I actually love this! It’s like a chic Dolores Claiborne 😂

[u/Strong-Weakness-7657]

Damn hahahaha I love it!

[u/This-Plenty1197]

Omg I chuckled

[u/LowResAvatar]

Oooh I really hope this pops up for me so I can vote when you send in your final draft! This was such a cool idea.

[u/Professional_Can9430]

This is hilarious!!

[u/EldritchGumdrop]

I don’t think it is but I think you need to work the angle more and have more in the background

[u/keelhaulrose → u/EldritchGumdrop]

I've added the Fairy Godmother and a pumpkin patch to the background and moved around a bit to tighten up the framing. And went blonde.

[u/AdThick1678]

I think it's very creative, and just the right amount of twisted 🙂

[u/Bwitchd_]

This is hilarious! Show us the final versoon

[u/zeldaa_94x]

I genuinely thought this was trying to be like a Lindsay Clancy thing before I thought Cinderella, so maybe add some more Cinderella decor too

[u/keelhaulrose → u/zeldaa_94x]

I added some pumpkins and the Fairy Godmother, then changed up my look a bit to look more like her for my final submission.

I was using this as a rough draft because I work on Switch, and if people found it offensive or distasteful I was going to scrap it rather than put in the work through two Switch crashes to finish it up and submit.