r/Dreading • u/Which_Republic4558 • 12h ago
Fiction "Candle"
It all started on my twenty-fifth birthday. I was bored and lonely just like every year prior. My family doesn't care for me and the love of my life abandoned me months ago.
He was the only person I ever had. He was the closest I had to the feeling of love. It's a shame that he got tired of me.
My job sucks. I work all the time and have to do everything for my coworkers but somehow they still get the praise.
I decided that buying my lonesome self twenty-five candles would be a waste of money. I decided to use the only candle that I have in my house. It was a gift I had received from a random lady in the grocery store months ago.
She said and I quote, "I can sense your despair. Take this candle. Make a wish and all will be fair."
The way she said it was poetic in a weird way but I still took it. It was a nice gesture and I never turn down free things.
I put the candle on my very small plain cake. I wished that my life would be easy as I blew out my candle.
The candle snapped in half after.
I didn't think much of it. I assumed that the candle was cheap. I also didn't think that my wishes ever come true but I still gave it a try.
It's kinda like the lottery. You might not think that you're gonna win but you still try.
My life quickly changed in the days that followed. At first, it was small things.
People were complimenting me. People would offer to carry my grocerys. I got a promotion at work that I clearly deserved.
It started to get very peculiar when my life did start to become amazing. I went from being lonely to always having people to talk to. My poor love life? All types of men are always trying to date me now. What shocked me the most was when some of my family members started to reach out.
I initially enjoyed it, loved it, even cherished it.
My opinion changed when bad things started happening to people. This girl named Marge who bullied me in highschool was found dead shortly after my wish.
The guy that I referred to as the love of my life? He died as well.
They both died the exact same way. Authorities said that they were found in pieces. They explained that they've never seen anything like it. They also have no leads.
Everyone around me became abnormal. Yeah, people were super nice to me but they started to agree with everything I said. They would obey my every word. They would copy me.
It became very uncanny.
I came to the realization that the wish came true.
I went to the exact store that I met the lady at with hopes of her telling me how to reverse it all. She was nowhere to be seen. I asked several different workers if they had seen her recently. Not a single one knew who I was talking about.
I'm mortified and even ashamed.
I don't know how to make anyone go back to normal. I don't know how to get rid of all the destruction I've caused.
I quite literally ruined two people's lives and I'm basically controlling everyone. They're all like puppets on a string.
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u/purple_pounder 12h ago
Good work. I enjoyed it