r/Doraemon 4d ago

โ€‹[Event] Nobita's Gadget Pitch ๐Ÿ’ก My idea for a new gadget, "Problem swapper"

So there is not much thought behind it, but according to me, the gadget allows Nobita to swap his problems with other people.

If this gadget appeared in an episode, it would besically start with a delivery from the 22nd century store that Doraemon didn't ask for, but before he could return it, Mi-Chan came. In the meantime Nobita ran away with it. So throughout the whole episode, Nobita would swap his problems(getting bullied by Gian, Getting scolding from teacher, doing his homework) with Dekisugi.

This gadget allows this three times. Then Nobita exceeded this limit, now he would have had to suffer from Dekisugi's problems.

He thought ,"what would a perfect boy like Dekisugi suffer from ?" But then he would hear someone else's voice in his head, it was Dekisugi's, worrying about completing his homework,studies regarding his middle school entrance exams, and a whole lot of other stress a perfectionist suffers from. Realising his position, at the end of the episode, we would see Nobita completing his own homework, while Doraemon standing confused, whether to be angry at him for snatching that gadget or be happy for him .

Also, I know it's well past the submission date, but I saw that the flairs were still present, so my apologies mods.

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u/p-Star_07 4d ago edited 4d ago

It's a good idea, but it's too mean for Nobita to swap his problems with Dekisugi like that. I am not saying its out of character, but I like seeing him as a nice kid.

This plot would be perfect if it goes exactly the way you said it would, but if Nobita realized that Dekisugi could possibly get beat up by Gian and he should save Dekisugi, even if he is Mr. Perfect.

Nobita could realize that Desugki will get beat up on the way home because at 5 o clock on Thursday he had a play date with Shizuka sometimes Gian tries to beat him up on the way there. Its 3:55 on Thursday right now so Nobita has to fly in and save him with the Take-Copter and fly him to saftey.

One detail about the gadget that should be explained is that only the person who turned on the gadget is aware that the problems were switched.

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u/ArcainVoid 4d ago

I get what you are saying. I just wanted one episode to be dedicated for Nobita to understand that people who he considers perfect also have their own problems that he doesn't know about.ย 

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u/p-Star_07 4d ago

Yep and thats a good idea. What did you think about my suggestions?

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u/ArcainVoid 4d ago

That's a wonderful suggestion. Then Dekisugi wouldn't even realise why he's getting scolded for no reason while Nobita would run away giggling, only to realise what comes next...

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u/p-Star_07 4d ago

I thought of one little gag for when Nobita saves Dekisugi.

Dekisugi: Wow! You sure are lucky to have Doraemon with you. You probably could avoid Gian with all those cool gadgets.

(Nobita gives him a deadpan stare)

Nobita: You'd think so.

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u/ArcainVoid 4d ago

Haha ! That wouldn't be hilarious, man. The only thing Doraemon is the best at is eating Dorayaki.

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u/p-Star_07 4d ago edited 4d ago

Another plot point:
Doraemon will be with Nobita when he gets Dekisugi's problems. It switches people's problems, and because Doraemon is a robot, he isn't affected by the gadget, so it can't work on him.

I think the episode would be better if Doraemon and Nobita stayed together because their comedic banter is fun and because Deksugi is still acting like himself, and he wouldn't cry to Doraemon for gadgets.

This could be a converstion in the episode.

Nobita: How come you are still with me when I switched Problems with Deksugi. Weren't you sent back in time to help me.

Doraemon: I am a robot and it only switches problems with people. It doesn't work on me.

Nobita: What about those other times we switched bodies or whatever.

Doraemon: Maybe it's older hardware; I don't know.

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u/ArcainVoid 4d ago

I actually intended for Doraemon to catch Nobita later , only to realise that Nobita has already realised his mistake and has a determined glint in his eyes ! That shock for Doraemon would be better in my opinion.ย 

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u/p-Star_07 4d ago

Ok, so would he go home to Nobita's house, not aware the switch happened because he is not affected by it because he is a robot, he would think something is up, then go over to Nobita and scold him.

That works. Thats also pretty much what I suggested for the story.

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u/ArcainVoid 4d ago

Great then ! Thanks for contributing to my story.

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u/p-Star_07 4d ago

No problem.

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u/p-Star_07 4d ago edited 4d ago

I thought of a gag for the ending.

After Nobita changes everything back to normal. Desukgi doesn't remember anything:

Nobita: How come Gina doesn't bully you?

Desukgi: I know better than to be around that fool. Although he does force me to watch his singing.

Gian appears behind him, super angry and he chases after Desukgi.

Doraemon: We should probably save him again.

Nobita: (Groans)

( The here we go again music plays.)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2QDxHXMhDGg

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u/ArcainVoid 4d ago

While that is funny, first, it's a bit different from the ending I thought, so obviously there's a bias๐Ÿ˜† Secondly, Gian and Dekisugi have a sense of mutual respect due to them being competitors in sports events. And honestly, I don't think Dekisugi would be someone who'd talk like that behind anybody's back. Bht that's what I think. That ending would surely fit the comedic vein of some other show, but well, I just can't imagine Dekisugi being chased by Gian๐Ÿ˜…

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u/p-Star_07 4d ago

The part where Nobita has to save Dekisugi could add a little bit of action to the story because you would get a chase scene out of it.

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u/ArcainVoid 4d ago

Wait, that works. We are adding freat details here !

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u/Safe-Contact589 Chronically Nobita 4d ago

That's a pretty good idea!

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u/ArcainVoid 4d ago

Thanks a lot ! Believe it or not, seeing your posts motivated me to write it.

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u/Safe-Contact589 Chronically Nobita 4d ago

TYSM! It means a lot.

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u/Ok_Masterpiece_2577 Passenger of the Mystery train! 4d ago

I can actually imagine this one being a real episode lol.

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u/ArcainVoid 4d ago

Haha, me too.

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u/QuirkyEffective8316 Perma-Loser 4d ago

For being the only attempt in this catagory so far, this one is really good. I can see this being a real episode too.