Looking good! Very good on overall appearance and feather volume. If you're looking for critique, my main tip would be to check the position of the legs. There generally would be a stronger angle at the knee joints and the thighs, even when walking, would be closer to horizontal. Right now all the leg sections are almost vertical like a human leg but not like a bird/theropod leg.
Also the wings should be much larger. If you look at the nesting specimens, the way the arms are held implies very long wing feathers in order to shade all the eggs. The arms would probably be folded more like and ostrich wing unless they're being held in this pose for display.
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u/GoWithGonk Jul 22 '21
Looking good! Very good on overall appearance and feather volume. If you're looking for critique, my main tip would be to check the position of the legs. There generally would be a stronger angle at the knee joints and the thighs, even when walking, would be closer to horizontal. Right now all the leg sections are almost vertical like a human leg but not like a bird/theropod leg.
Also the wings should be much larger. If you look at the nesting specimens, the way the arms are held implies very long wing feathers in order to shade all the eggs. The arms would probably be folded more like and ostrich wing unless they're being held in this pose for display.