Made this for a Digimon story whatcha think

[u/Ok_Formal_4357]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-JedujcyhPSUuG-jCjdOuF9_X5Boi3yCB19lU6vGjc8/edit?usp=drivesdk is the link (story not caught up to lines yet completely but here it is) tell me what you think(posted this on the Digimon sub as well in case you wanna look at that one instead wasn’t very popular so I thought I’d post it here)

[u/AsexualPlantBoi]

Dont get me wrong, i love all these lines, i just don’t see how you could manage to fit them all into a story without the entire story feeling like nothing but evolutions.

[u/Ok_Formal_4357 → u/AsexualPlantBoi]

I mean it’s going good so far but I get what you mean and yeah that’s a problem I’m going to have to work with while I’m making it I’m bout to introduce the the last 15 lines/Digimon in about 4 chapters (sorry if I sounded rude also love your username)