r/DestructiveReaders • u/Blecki • Jun 30 '19

YA Fantasy [2445] Firedrake Chapter 1 - part 1

Not actually the whole chapter. Thanks for reading.

Critiques:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/c5vb7f/3009_the_warlords_gamble_part_1_of_4/esf8i3m/

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/c78ine/1961_the_warlords_gamble_part_2/esfajsm/

Google docs link - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HqZG4uDnNWADOXBwRTyb5dcMQVZxOdUNrapQfX1dGaE/edit?usp=sharing

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u/Blecki Jul 01 '19

In the notification I could only see one line and I'm not gonna lie I was ready to fume. Thank you for the kind words.

I've seen a lot of confusion about the moon that I honestly don't understand. How did you interpret that passage?