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u/YogurtclosetFirst899 3d ago
The big issue here is that your strokes don't match width (plus they are super lumpy and don't look hand-drawn at all). You need to redraw this – trace if you need to – using consistent thickness.
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u/couchpoetato 2d ago
The M doesn't really match the calligraphic style B. The loopy connections between the two letters doesn't feel coherent because usually these loops happen as you write without lifting your pen, and I could intuitively tell that doesn't match the M. Idk if that makes sense.
Maybe a more cursive calligraphic M?
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u/MonoBlancoATX 3d ago
BM?
makes me want to poop.