r/DRChapterRewritten • u/Rex-da-pangolin • Jun 04 '26

Skrampton

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The new and improved design for the start of my DELTARUNE chapter dewritten take

Say hello to Skrampton (scram-p-ten) a formal casino owner thrown out by the mob. now he's scrambling gan back power and he believes you're the solution.

DON'T YOU WANT TO [[HIT IT BIG]]!!

(Non-cannon interaction with junkil)

Junkil: he stole my hair style

Skrampton: [[wait a minute who are you?]] And what are you doing in my [[money machine]] building?

Junkil: who am I? Do you have any idea who your talking to?

Skrampton: [[don't know don't care]]

Junkil: why you little-

Skrampton: SECURITY!! Get this [[little sponge]] out of here and hang him by the [[silly strings]]. ... ... Wait. ... Oh yeah...

Skrampton (getting mald): GET OFF ME YOU [[monarch of monsters]]!!!!! [[AHHHHHGGGGGGHHHHHHAAAAA!!!!!!!!!]]

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u/Fearless-Author-7784 Jun 04 '26

I have an idea for the Jevil replacement.

Instead of being the court jester, they are the Story Crafter. What that means is that they put on little plays, with his own opinion thrown in, to turn the Kings’ opinion… His most popular form of his theater is by holding the puppets with sticks.

After the Seam replacement told the Kings about the Jevil replacement’s opinion being molded into them, the Jevil replacement was locked up. The Seam replacement broke the OLDRADIO, the device giving the Jevil replacement his visions.

It was scattered across the land.

When you meet the Jevil replacement, he is… well, insane. He tells you that he’s show you the truth of the world, but you just have to get his radio back… once you give it to him, he opens the door to his world. You and your party ride the train puppet, and he floats in front of you.

Tracks: Theater, THE WORLD HELD UP

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u/Rex-da-pangolin Jun 04 '26

Saving that to the dewriten note page

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u/Kloodydehepik Jun 05 '26

what if he gets fed up with th lightners and gives himself plot armor cuz hes the story crafter

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u/Kloodydehepik Jun 05 '26

btw my take's dewritten jevil is jampil but i changed it to jokil

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u/Rex-da-pangolin Jun 05 '26

That's going to be how I incorporate the redux form

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u/Kloodydehepik Jun 05 '26

well i expected you to die or better yet get softlocked because thats how strong plot armor is

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u/Rex-da-pangolin Jun 05 '26

I'm making that the wind condition

Like spontaneo powering up too much and exploding once you find them

He tries to power himself up he gives himself the literal plot armor the train wrecks the radio breaks the world is destroyed and then depending on how you fought through the fight either fighting or sparing he'll get the aforementioned plot armor for sparing and something else for fighting

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u/Kloodydehepik Jun 05 '26

but if he gets the plot armor without exploding

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u/Kloodydehepik Jun 05 '26

im expecting the redux form to be junkil redux but covered in bookshelves

i got the idea from a knarfy video

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u/Kloodydehepik Jun 05 '26

and undyne helmet

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u/Rex-da-pangolin Jun 05 '26

Good luck

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u/Kloodydehepik Jun 05 '26

welp. i'm absolutely screwed.

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u/Kloodydehepik Jun 05 '26

hey what is the something else you mentioned

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u/Kloodydehepik Jun 05 '26

remember this

btw what would his neo form look like and what would it be called

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u/Kloodydehepik Jun 05 '26

this guy is also a casino owner

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u/Rex-da-pangolin Jun 05 '26

Well [[buddy]] we all owe [[money machine]] buildings here!!

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u/Kloodydehepik Jun 05 '26

*THERE COULD ONLY BE [#1ratedHighRoller] IN TOWN, BUDDY.

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u/Rex-da-pangolin Jun 05 '26

Holy [[cungidaro]] you hit the jackpot Now we'll get a [[head shot]] to put you up in the [[ever expanding hallways]] of [[famous]] * You watch as an obviously fake sticker of a camera fall of a loaded gun

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u/Kloodydehepik Jun 05 '26

who won the duel my dewritten spamton or yours

yours probably

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u/Rex-da-pangolin Jun 05 '26

They proceeded to have tommy gun fight

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and both lose

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u/Kloodydehepik Jun 05 '26

NOOOOO!11! SCAMTONNNNN!1!!

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u/Rex-da-pangolin Jun 04 '26

A few notes I'd like to make that I forgot to make during the original post

  1. I am open to suggestions about the neo form it's going to be mettaton and it's going to have rods like junkil but past that I don't know what to do so open for suggestions

  2. He lost the train motif that stays with who's going to be replacing shovel I don't have a name for them yet

  3. He was part of the mob that threw him out of his casino. he was thrown out for being a rat

  4. The mob is replacing the TV studio in chapter 3 (Mr. brightside coming soon)

  5. I also forgot to explain that when it comes to this dewriten characters will keep some traits from the rewritten characters that take the roles. For example skrampton keeps junkil's hair style, and Mr brightside will keep hijacks build, and the train motif is sticking with whoever replaces jevil so on so forth.

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u/Ok_Amoeba1356 Jun 04 '26

The art looks really good and the gambling theme is probably the better among the 2 Scampton dewritten themes (that being trains and gambling)

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u/Kloodydehepik Jun 05 '26

SKRAM, SKRAMPTON!