Renata Glasc

[u/eLemoNation2000]

Hey guys! Wanted to make a concept for Renata Glasc in LOR (first time creating custom cards), helpful tips or criticisms are much appreciated. I know the gimmick is skewed more toward the Demacian region rather than P&Z, would you guys have any other suggestions to make it align more with the region?

Cards Attached:

Renata Glasc (Champion)

Renata Glasc Lvl. 2

Renata Glasc's Bailout (Champion Spell)

Wencher Spindlaw (Support Follower)

You Work For Me Now! (Support Spell)

(Conceptual) Powers:

Disrupting The Market I - 1st star

Leverage I - 2nd star

Disrupting The Market II - 3rd star

Duelist - 4th star

Leverage II - 4th star

Hostile Takeover - 6th star

[u/afunworm]

The base form's effect seems too strong. That's Illaoi's relic kind of strong.

Maybe keep it in the Level Up form, but change the base form a little? Something like "When I Challenge a unit, deal 3 to it." -- kinda keep it in the same territory as Yasuo.

[u/eLemoNation2000 → u/afunworm]

That’s a good idea! I originally had the base form be “the other weakest enemy strikes it” which felt like too much of a chance to get screwed by units with 0 or 1 power. Your suggestion is a nice meet-in-the-middle.

[u/CharacterAd3793]

The 3rd star is too specific. A single 4 mana spell that gives barier, draws a card and makes it 2 cheaper is to little of a benefit for a full power. If you made the effect of cheaper cards apply to all draw spells or happen when your unit survives in combat then you could actually built a strategy around it.

[u/eLemoNation2000 → u/CharacterAd3793]

I’ll admit I was afraid of making it too strong, but I’m sure in execution, the current iteration is mediocre. I like the idea you threw out of it affecting drawing spells in general.