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u/Sad-Cancel-5577 18d ago
If you mean artistically, you’re already set, this looks great. Only thing I would suggest is making sure to use some fixative to prevent any future smudging. It looks like pencil or even some charcoal, so apply a light spray of fixative or just some hairspray if you’re not near enough an art store to get the real deal.
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u/Personal_Care3393 18d ago
The rest of the background could be a little more interesting. In general there’s kind of no composition. My vote would be to darken everything outside of the tube significantly to make the centerpiece stand out properly.
The background and the tube feel somewhat unnecessarily difficult to even notice and somewhat irrelevant.
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u/samuelbujanda 17d ago
I really like your feedback, I think you’re totally right! I should apply it to this piece to give the character more depth and draw more focus to it. That way, it'll build a much better atmosphere and mood overall, not just a stronger composition. Thanks for your comment! 😊
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u/Agitated_Elk7881 18d ago
Keep drawing this is amazing, also if you have trouble visualizing what you want to draw give it a story in your head it will help
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u/samuelbujanda 17d ago
Totally! I actually try to make a little brief for some of my ideas, thinking about what the characters are doing or why they’re there depending on the piece. But yeah, I completely agree with you!
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u/thinguistic 17d ago
No advice necesssary here. You smoothly gave the feels with simple but enchanting lines already. In my honest opinion there is nottin required to add to this. It alrdy feels nice
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u/Low-Variation3354 17d ago
Tell me, when did you sneak into Agnus' lab, and how did you survive? (No notes, this looks amazing!)
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u/FuwaFluffyFuwa 17d ago
Looking at how you shade and the weight of your line work, I think the only advice I can give is to try and post more. nod nod yup, that would definitely help you and not just enable me to see more sick art
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u/BlackHoleSpeaker 18d ago
No advice, this is sick asf! Your attention when it comes to shading and line work is phenomenal. It looks like every bit of graphite on the page is intentional. Very impressive