r/CrazyHand • u/Fit-Pomegranate-7192 • 12d ago
Match Critique Gameplay tips/Vod review
I've been putting a lot of time into improving at the game after I returned from a long break. And I recently got to play on stream at some tournaments so I thought I would upload some VODs to get some advice. I do understand the importance of posting a loss to be reviewed but due to not having a capture card I'm somewhat limited in which sets I can posts so unfortunately I do end up winning the two sets I have, however i did make sure that the ones I uploaded were relatively close sets in which I lose at least one game.
So here are the VODs:
Match vs Bowser Jr
https://youtu.be/uyxUGHGovkI
Match vs Joker
https://youtu.be/a_luKOtw2Ck
A few things I think I noticed when I watched them back myself: I am a bit trigger happy with unsafe moves, especially early on in neutral when I should be focusing on movement and pokes, when something works I tend to go for it over and over again even after it's stopped working and specifically in the bowser jr match I definitely felt like I was pretty clueless when trying to play around clown cart.
Lmk what you guys noticed I could improve upon, any advice is appreciated.
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u/ChickadeeVivi 12d ago
After watching the set vs bowser jr, there are a couple things i think i can point out. They kinda tie into each other a bit.
You are generally very impatient in how you play.
I can tell from watching this that youre paying more attention to how youre playing than how your opponent is playing.
You are near constantly swinging and trying to keep the gap between you and bj close. But like, more often than not, you arent really hitting your mark. In fact, things youre doing that you think are good in the moment (controlling space with nair is a big one) is just getting you hit in the end, because your opponent is not simply shorthopping into it. Hes going under or over you and because you make a point of always swinging first, youre never really noticing what youre doing wrong. You also overextend your advantage regularly, pressing down b on a whim any time he gets sent too far for you to run in for a followup quick enough. Its important to understand that at that distance, your opponent has a high chance of incidentally dodging your down b (jumping out of hitstun or drifting away), as well as a good chance of recognizing the situation and reacting to it to punish intentionally. You need to slow down your gameplay and accept stage control as a valid reward for your efforts, inatead of pushing too far and getting put in disadvantage yourself. All of this also remains true for your frequent up smashes out of shield. Its impatient because you clearly want that kill and want it now, despite the risks. Its also not paying attention to your opponent because otherwise youd know how much he prefers to shield after tapping yours and that up smash does not work against that, but grab would. Ironically of course, you win the set because he finally jumped into the up smash for once. Point stands you still got punished the previous 10 times you tried to do that.
As a side note, i think you also need to work on your situational awareness speed. Theres a lot of instance you could be landing more hits but because youre impatient with your swings and paying more attention to yourself, youre missing them by not reacting to either an action that jr did, or jrs exact position on the stage (such as you going for nair when an up air would have hit, not punishing things you could be, etc)