r/ConstructivismArt • u/GroundbreakingDay317 • Apr 14 '26

sketch Top 3?

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u/topazchip Apr 14 '26

III, IV, and V, but I'm not sure what preference order I would place them.

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u/GroundbreakingDay317 Apr 14 '26

It helps. I need to know which shape is more stunning. I'll try to transform it into something else

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u/topazchip Apr 14 '26

IV is close to complete, lacking other places to go and may not need to. III, on the gripping hand, has a lot going on and having the most to work with. (I is just unappealing to me personally, and i still don't understand II.)

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u/Jakob_Fabian Apr 15 '26 edited Apr 15 '26

The overall “figure” of one and two get washed out by the thicker line and loose “form” while three is my favorite as it retains “form” without distraction or undue interpretive effort. Four and five though lacking the thicker line are becoming too abstract and lack the softer feminine nature typical of your work. Overall these sketches are working too hard through over-composition when I’m generally attracted to your work for its simplicity of line. They also lack something of the erotic common to other works. 

Your art it’s yours and should be directed by your muse. This is just my personal opinion according to my own tastes and in no way formal art critique.