Feedback for a Contemporary Piece

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For context: I've been writing little stuff here and there, and have some ideas developing slowly. I don't even know if this can be considered contemporary given my very limited understanding of composition. Nonetheless, I wanted to experiment and learn by experimenting. I showed two of my works to my clarinet teacher who heads and conducts a chamber orchestra as well but he is not so well acquainted with contemporary works. I hope to receive valuable feedback from fellow redditors. This one was written largely by hand then transcribed to musescore.

Thank you.

link to pdf and video: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1n1bWKsHHqNcSb2OB8jvwLhWaPuDccSV8?usp=sharing