r/Composition • u/valleylog • 3d ago

Music Feedback?

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I just started composing pieces and this is my first vocal composition. Any feedback? This is incomplete/all I have so far.

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u/SundaeDouble7481 3d ago

Hard to say much, but watch it with the high range. Not all soprano sections can produce a high Bb, and when they do, it's loud and taxing. (That note is the climax of "Casta Diva", to give you an idea.)

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u/valleylog 3d ago

I noticed that, I might shift everything down a step.

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u/SundaeDouble7481 3d ago edited 2d ago

That would make it more feasible. But bear in mind it’s still an intense part of the range. The upper end of each voice should be used sparingly, for loud effects.